All Comments on 'The Secret within Me Ch. 03'

I cannot wait until the next chapter you have me hooked on every word. Brilliant!

Well written. Good way to portray the happenings of the evening. Will be interesting to see future chapters.

You know how to raise tension. Will he get her to show off to others I wonder?

Has a sense or realism lacking in some other stories. What can be done to keep the excitement going? I think I know, but want to see.

Please continue.............

What can I say. Just brilliant ! We all have our likes and dislikes in a story and thoughts as to how we would like it to go. The stimulation for me is imaging how the story could develop... could it be that David stimulates Yvette to try things she would not have done with her husband ? which he loving her as he does would not want her to do ? In turn Yvonne finds denying her husband this side of herself and teasing him about it... stimulating also... maybe submitting more to David while starting to enjoy a dominate side with her husband ? Can Yvonne's husband accept this ? does he find himself enjoying this denial and finding Yvonne/Yvette doing things with David that she does not do with him stimulates a submisive side he did not know he had ? Does David encourage Yvette/Yvonne in this development... with subtle manoevering so that the husband is asking to be 'caged' to ensure he does not cheat.... can we imagine a date where all 3 spend a short holiday together but it is David and Yvette who are the couple... who knows where we are taken. All I can say is thank you for this story which seems to be developing beautifully. I look foward to the ride and the twists and turns along the way in this developing story of relationships and fun ! all the best ColinRupert

Wonderful as ever. I think I would like her to become very submissive to David too. Not into "caging" the husband, but I do enjoy the development of his attitude to the events as it is a real life experience for me as I know it is for Rotter.

John J

Please continue! And cage away! Love the story!

In truth prefer the EMT storyline...but thanks for both.

I really like where this story is going - the beginning to be dominant wife, the husband finding cuckold desires. He will want all the details as do I so keep going it's great stuff.

This is one of the most realistic, sensitive portrayals of a husband and wife entering into a cuckold relationship I have ever ready. Keep it up!

As in my first remark to this series I would like to restate that this is very well done. But where to now?

Yvette can do anything she likes but the genuine love and respect between husband and wife should not be compromised.

From your few words of description concerning her thoughts I feel that she may be evolving her feelings and her role with her husband within the overall scenario. Protective, more controlling but sincere affection.

I think Yvette should continue to develop with her "Master" but never lose her husband.

Richard

please continue this amazing story!

An incident happened early in our marriage which got me wondering similar to the hubby in this story. Wife returning from a long overseas flight telling about meeting this smart, handsome, flirtatious guy siting next to her on an almost empty plane and what happened between them on the flight. And later on how things developed... Hearing it the first time, I had similar reaction, something stirring, the feeling of shock at the realization, the jealousy, the anger, the excitement, the disgust... it was crazy. I went online looking for answers and was shocked to find I was not alone... a lot has happened since then. I'm not a great writer like the author here but wish I could work with someone to put together a series of stories like this narrating how our lives have progressed since then...

On the other hand would love to see this Yvonne/Yvette duel build and develop further. It's a nice way to help the wife deal with any feelings of guilt and express/experience her innermost feeling and desires openly. At the same time giving her husband a ring side view into it all, taking him on the ride of his life...

Been a year!

Guess I was still focused on 2016. It's been 2 years!

I just discovered this story a few days ago, I really enjoyed it--as far as it got (Chapter 3)..

It s now June 26, 2017 and it looks like you have "fallen off the map." Too bad for those us who have been "hooked" by your story.

Dear Author, Hope all is well... sincerely hope you do find the time to write further... this story has all the makings of a 'classic' ! ColinRupert

And sexy. More please.

Fabulous story! It’s been some time since this chapter ended and I don’t think I’m alone in wanting to see what happens next.

Very well written tale! I gave it 5 stars.

More please,!! So well written, each word mattered.

Makes the actions more interesting.

Sorry, I screwed that up, my comment is in the title. I didn’t notice that wasn’t the space for the comment. I hope it all shows. In essence, bottom line is it’s a terrific, well conceived and well written story. I hope you continue it.

This is about as good as it gets. Love your story and definitely want to hear more.

The guy who wants more action is a moron. This is a perfectly balanced story, well written and engaging. Please carry on I love it.

EXCELLENT story. Well written, believable and loving.

Excellent writing and virtually no editing mistakes. Agonizing build up! Would have liked a bit more for the "climax" - not enough detail to sate my lust after the long road to get to the end.

Excellent writing and pace. Time for part 4!

I just came hard when she said he was big

Well... That was simply outstanding. Pacing, grammar, story, everything. Thank you.

Simply one of the best stories in this category in ages, superb. More please, harder!

I wonder why he is so passive about it all. Waiting at home for his wife, accepting it all.

We learn everything what they drink and eat at the date, but know nothing of what happened in the hotel room.

Yes, I like to read part 4. Pls ad more tension in the relationship.

Thanks in advance