All Comments on 'The Secretary's Penance'

A great story, very hot. Loved it.

Great start to a series. Thank you

Good premise.

But really rushed sex.

Needed more preliminaries/teasing. Telling her how what he was doing to felt to him. Asking her how it felt to her.

Lacks any subtlety at all.

Four stars.

Looking forward to the next chapter maybe he will bring her home so the wife can enjoy her as he takes her last cherry.

You have my attention. Mind wandering about what is in store for Miss Silva.

love it

well written, while the plot has been done before, you didnt make it cliche. It was well edited and frankly hot. Im curious to see you continue and see if he will actually whore her out to clients or other employees. Management of course.

“My own personal whore, the possibilities were endless.”

Can’t wait to see busty Miss Sylva in her new work outfit. No need to hurry the story. Take your time so us readers can relish the details, her reluctance, and what she feels when she accepts her new role. I am sure that the author can write many more chapters describing her adventures at work and with clients.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Good except for the magical self-lubricating ass.

anal tag saved me from reading three pages of some closeted Brit's fantasy of a dry, gender-neutral, filthy asshole.

You lost me in the opening paragraph, because never in my life have I wanted to cum all over someone's face. Probably because I have realationships with people that I find interesting and worthy of knowing, so I have no desire to treat them like a piece of garbage.

Great storyline. Though the sex was rushed. I think it was awesome that Miss Sylva was made to suck dick for her sins. But for someone who spoke of her glasses so much I would like to have squirted a giant load on her Veronica’s Latina face with glasses on and gave her lick the rest of the floor. But like he said she it’s a whore the possibilities are endless

Revenge!

Remember Monica Lewinsky? She trapped a president by saying her cum-stained dress. Veronica could get Bender to ejaculate in her bra, maybe multiple days (“Oh, I love it. I want to wear it all day”)

And then negotiate an agreement.

More money

Some level of continued sex

Employment guarantee

And his 7 figure salary is never threatened.

Good Story can't wait to see where it goes from here.