All Comments on 'The Secrets of an Indian Wife Ch. 04'

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guysimple1674guysimple1674over 3 years ago
Brilliant development

This story is taking a very good shape. the character is evolving very well, with all the different forces acting on her the heroine is indeed a woman of steel, and womanly feelings, all melted into one. Would like to know more about her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I'd prefer not to label this as racist because there is too much of that going around, but what is the significance of knowing she's an INDIAN wife? Are they all whores? are all their husbands cucks like this story would imply? there's 1.6 billion chinese, I don't want to necessarily read a story singling them out either. just seems odd, plus its a poor story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Waiting for more

A beautiful story from this talented writer. Can u just ignore the haters, and continue the series; or maybe a new spinoff

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Is some part missing?

When was a series encounter with ramulu mentioned? I think you forgot to mention thaf that part. Just like what happened after she wore that ghaghra to go shopping...

sweetdreamsssssweetdreamssssover 3 years ago
Wow your story is getting even better

Make her do with more men but slowly getting into it ..

GnosticStrangerGnosticStrangerover 3 years ago
Ramlulu meeting is missing

The escapade with ramulu was missed so was a lil confused...otherwise great work...maybe make her go online chatting n make money..her new business o maybe they bith to outside for a business trip n she enjoys with whites o blacks

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Fantasy in words

After long time, completed four-part story in single day. You have given words to my fantasy. Though not everything, but still plot creation was very relatable. I hope for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story. This story is pure a masterpiece. Looking forward for updates.

Purely a masterpiece. Nice plot. Please post updates

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I loved the slow but steady build-up in this story.

So desperately wanting for next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Next part?

Ramulu part is missing, and waiting for next one

pinkykumarpinkykumarabout 3 years ago

Beautiful story. Write next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Introduce a muslim man ..... fucking this hindu wife... it will become real.... hindu girl love muslim men ....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Kavya should invite ramulu to this place for a whole day enjoyment. He would ravish and satisfy her till she would want him forever.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Next part?

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