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by happierbunny

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
HOT

Wow...that was amazingly hot.

lordchilworthlordchilworthover 15 years ago
thanks

thanks... succinct without being brief... passionate without being soppy... erotic without being grimy... your writing could develop into something to be really proud of..

A suggestion without criticism... try to start each paragraph with a more eclectic and exiting words, there are a lot of I's at the starts...

please ... more

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