All Comments on 'The Seduction Ch. 04'

He leaves her alone. She is seduced. What's surprising about that. Keep it going.

Well i have read most off the comments yet i feel your story rocks. I like the way she is drawn into the whole thing, at first unwilling but then becoming unable, unable to stop.

You know I have read all the comments and the good out weighs the bad but that normal. It's just like anything else in life, if you you don't like it don't read it. I think the story is great, I don't think there is a man or woman (except for a few negative individuals out there)that wouldn't like to be thrown into that situation. In fact I read this and think of this woman that I know who is left alone a lot by her husband because he is off working most of the time. I place her in the story and wish this was me.

So let the critics whine, you can't stop them just keep up the good work.

read the comment that said if you don't like it don't read it, once again how do you know if you don't read it wizard.

Through all of this, I have lost track of the son. Was he only mentioned at the beginning of the story?