All Comments on 'The Seduction of Louise Ch. 14'

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eric shawn listoeric shawn listoalmost 20 years ago
good job Jaymie!

I love your story, taking us places stories on this site rarely go. Hate to see it end. With the novel length stories you gotta stay with them. Things characters do that you may not like in one chapter will be explained in the future.

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 4 years ago

It made me worried reading the description of the chapter that Ross might be moving back in. Glad to see the fucker get what he deserved. I never liked those conservative, holier than thou type assholes. It was funny, though, to see his reaction when Louise told him about Jamie. On to the finale!

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