All Comments on 'The Seduction of Nana'

by Jimyfoxx

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LookOldButFeelYoungLookOldButFeelYoungover 2 years ago

He needs to take her ass too....... more role play??

sportingone09sportingone09over 2 years ago

Old/Young. you are right he should have buried his cock deep in her ass.

icing on the cake for me...

HDblackheartHDblackheartover 2 years ago

Okay not bad but in bedroom role play weapons like knives have no place as accidents can happen I would personally work with a authenticity re colored squirt gun just to make it more real but not stupidly deadly real as the two of them could easily have an accident and kill one or the other by mistake for bdsm knives are okay but only in a far more controlled environment other than that one problem the story is magnificent keep up the good work

ps as a Dom I keep a knife near to help if the safety word is ever used or in case of emergency

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Just an above average guy with an over active imagination trying to create a titillating story or two. If you are looking for quick cheap sex with no plot-- look elsewhere.