All Comments on 'The Seduction of Vanessa'

Same pace style and content as before- need to expand from the turning young dumb straight girls... not particularly believable or arousing

Great job! A little rushed. Would have been nice to see the reluctance drawn out or the ending made a little sharper. That said you have talent

hmmm that was hot! Loved it!

I appreciate the feedback and the suggestions.

I have a certain theme I like to stick with, but within that theme I will try my best to improve the quality of my stories.

Thanks!

The sex was lacking details!!! I wanted some more play by play...it was over waaaaay to quick...but it was a great start, hooked me in right away

it was so hot, but i barely got hot when the seduction was over. it had me super hot and horny, but i didn't get off before it ended. please add more i love the theme

Very good, left me on the edge of my seat. You should right a part 2!

Your story got me horny and wet! Now I will have to finish that part while thinking about orgasms.

Really hot and steamy, good work. But this seriously feels like a copy and paste of the other 2 stories. And I must point out that Sam seemed a bit too forceful and overstepped several boundaries, which would cause any normal girl to immediately remove themselves from that situation rather than allowing them to get carried away with someone like this. All fiction, I get that, just seemed unrealistic in general.

Older lady seducing younger girl is creepy.

To fast, should have been a little more reluctant. Maybe more words of resistance from Vanessa

Billie Loren You got great stories on straight girl turning them into lesbian and staying with person for life and girlfriends. What up to you

This is a GREAT story! Thanks. More please.

very unlikely start to a relationship and moved so quickly it was difficult to feel the characters.