by PlainJane12
I'm not even trying to keep up anymore. So many plot twists, I don't know whats happening. So im just gonna stop makin predictions, and read it when updates come out, and let it all happen.
My chief complaint is the badass thing. I hate it. It takes me out of the story every time i see the word. It doesnt fit the setting, its overused, i just hate it. Otherwise, good work
I love it, well done! You're doing such a great job, please please continue! Thankyou for all you've done so far.
This is fun!
Lots of twists. Emotional confusion. Engaging characters who all seem to know more than they are letting on. I can hardly wait for the next segment