All Comments on 'The Seductive Slime'

5 stars! Oh yes, more please. Thanks for your time and imagination.

I like the story focus. I have perused your stories before, but your more right to the point stories didn't appeal to me. I like a good build up. Looking forward to the rest of the story

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Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

I like the slow build up, but this was more of a tease, really. A little bit of sex wouldn’t have hurt

Also, if someone had been unconscious for three days, I doubt the hospital would have released him immediately. At the very least a whole lot of tests for the probable concussion and such

But that’s just for the future. For now you should just get on with writing the sex and maybe Callista’s back story

Play with my food. Omg, that's deliciousl. I hope there's a chapter 2 so we can experience that with them.