All Comments on 'The Seeker and the Source Pt. 01'

A very promising start to your story if not a little ironic that this elf’s destined mate is of a ‘lesser race’. Looking forward to reading more.

Tess (UK)

A little different tribute to Tolkien but a very good one! It was a pleasure to read so far and i hope you will continue. Hopefully the girl got some spirit in her and is not so fragile and innocent as he thinks.

Mia

Hope you keep up the story, wonderful read

Looking forward to reading more!

Once again.... Bravo!

This got me very excited! Can't wait for continuation

Just read your bio- this is such a great piece and none would have thought you were dyslexic! You definitely have a gift in writing and hope to see your next chapter soon!

This is shaping up to be a cracking story. keep going!

Moree

a promising start, but the part about what is and what isn't enslavement was just ridiculous, sounds like some bonehead from the South of the US talking about African Americans

Anonymous really, I am just a bonehead.

The reason why I set this world in a fantasy, was to avoid those sorts of comparisons. Please know, I tried very hard not to let my own personal beliefs effect my story, just like I hope people don't assume my personal beliefs based on this story.

Hopefully, with time, my writing will get better.

Either way I encourage everyone to read on to the foreword at the end to see why.

Happy reading!

- C