All Comments on 'The Semi-Ethical Mind Controller'

One of the best written stories I have seen here. Good job! I will look for more to come!

Looking forward to more from you.

There are very few "semi-ethical" mind control stories here, so this was a welcome change from the brutal domination and harem collection. Those stories have their time and place, but this was really enjoyable, and one I will definitely return to. I hope to see more, both from you and of this story.

I spent most of the time when she was at his house thinking, "19 is just too young for the ways she's acting. The author should've made her a little older for this behavior to be more believable." Then I got quite a surprise there at the end!

Very enjoyable read. Thanks!

I'd love to see more of this world if not this character

Loved the pace. Loved the world. Loved everything. Great story! Thank you for writing it!

Very nice. Enjoyed the hell out of it. If this is just a one parter or part of series. nicely done.

Thank you for the kind words, everyone. I had started this as just one short story. But, I seem to have created a universe in which much else can happen. The back of my mind is working what that might be.

What is certain is that we have not heard the last of Howard, Daisy, and Lianne.

That we haven't heard the last of Howard, Daisy, and Lianne. I very much loved this story and can't wait for more.

What a wonderful story! Not only a mature exploration of issues, but well written, sexy, with a wonderful twist, and ending with hope for the future.

...and just what are the fourth group?

If the Muse moves you to continue with this, please do -- but don't force it, as it's wonderful as it is.

A neat new twist to life’s main game. I really enjoyed it even if I saw her being a powerful person too.

I missed on the neighborhood milf though but that part was superfluous anyway.

A solid 5 stars for a novel new twist.

Bill S.