All Comments on 'The Seventh Commandment'

by L_Britz

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gordo12gordo12about 9 years ago
Great for a first story

I hope you'll keep writing! 3*

bob114bob114about 9 years ago
Good Job

This calls for a chapter 2 and 3 keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Hot story except that other were betrayed to the highest degree. They fall to their own spouses as cheating pigs and back stabbing friends.

L_BritzL_Britzabout 9 years agoAuthor
So grateful!

Thanks for the positive feedback! It really helps my confidence as a fledgling writer :) I'll definitely work on sequels to this story - I don't think I'm quite done with James and Tessa. A warning though: it's going to get pretty dark before the happy ending. But I promise it'll be worth it ;) thanks again!

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