by storm_usmc
This is fun ... and an adventurous, kick-ass woman is particularly a good read.
I can't wait for the next chapter. Your stories are excellent. You take the time to make the characters come alive. Thanks for sharing them
Geez! There better be another chapter soon... It will not arrive too soon.
I know this has been said a thousand times but I am serious: This is one of the top stories I've read here. You, sir, are a deft wordsmith. I don't often get so involved in the tales I read here. (I'm not glossing over your other works; I've enjoyed them all.)
The first chapter was wonderful, but a bit sad when she admitted to changing her number, so "Chip" could not track her. But then as Alanza danced for Thomas on the vent, sans panties, I knew you had a sweet love story to tell us.
Thank you.
Rick
I think you could make a stand-alone story detailing how Alanza teaches Kristen the ways of the world. Hint, hint...
I’ve been waiting patiently for Ch. 02 and now I can’t wait for Ch. 03. All of your recent stories are very well written and extremely hot.
Wow! I want to be an exhibitionist so bad. These stories are things I would love to do. It doesn't matter that I'm a guy. At least not to me. I love being exposed with the risk of being caught. Please continue these wonderful adventures.
very nice story. Loved the way it was written.
Will have to go and find your other stories!
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