All Comments on 'The Shadows in Her Wake Ch. 02'

by LittleIrishDolly

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Was she a virgin?

You didn't make that very clear.Maybe if there were a little more details

not on the rape, as much as her feelings during it.

keep writing.

LittleIrishDollyLittleIrishDollyabout 12 years agoAuthor
Feelings

There is a reason that her feelings were not described just now, I promise.

SurprisingMyselfSurprisingMyselfabout 12 years ago
Longer please.

That was still pretty short. I hope the chapters get more involved. Good start though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Hmmmm

Very well written and still very intriguing. I'm very interested in where the story is going, and where the characters are leading us - Tyler does not seem like the usual feeble minded doormat, I cannot realistically see how she could or would want to forgive this horrible thug for what he has just done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
<3

please write some more, love it

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