by LittleIrishDolly
Very well written and still very intriguing. I'm very interested in where the story is going, and where the characters are leading us - Tyler does not seem like the usual feeble minded doormat, I cannot realistically see how she could or would want to forgive this horrible thug for what he has just done.
That was still pretty short. I hope the chapters get more involved. Good start though.
There is a reason that her feelings were not described just now, I promise.
You didn't make that very clear.Maybe if there were a little more details
not on the rape, as much as her feelings during it.
keep writing.