All Comments on 'The Shady Spa'

by SLVe

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alloy007alloy007about 7 years ago
Wow

The title of my comment says it all really. This story is simply spectacular.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
great story

would love a sequel, with her taking her brother's huge cock deep up her ass, then doing ass to mouth afterwards.

Robinius1Robinius1about 7 years ago
Sexy!

Very Good. I expect she liked the massage given her pussy by her brother even more than the professional one. I was confused at first as the sexual massage for brother and sister continued after they screwed but the cum swap explained that - nice touch. I enjoyed this one quite a bit - the build-up was very well done. Thanks!

travelingguy26travelingguy26about 7 years ago
Would love a part two

Hope there is a sequel

bobt2928bobt2928about 7 years ago
Very entertaining

Good read thanks, so many places this could go. Again good job.

mountaincat4mountaincat4about 7 years ago
Unexpectedly good

This is the best massage story I've read on Lit. I'll have one of these massages once a week if you please.

prop69prop69about 7 years ago
Weak ending

Is she going to fuck her brother? Left me wanting more

SLVeSLVeabout 7 years agoAuthor
Up Next

Thanks everyone for the responses.

For those of you who enjoyed the story, I have some good news. I did develop an idea I liked for where to take this next while I was writing it. The bad news is that I have a few other ideas I am working on as well as a number of mostly completed drafts I need to edit to before uploading here. So, a sequel will likely come but it may be a couple months.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
great one!

enjoyed it immensely!

Most requests are for more incest. However, I think that whatever direction this story takes, it needs to involve 'Bailey'. A threesome, a second visit to the spa, or some sex reporting between the girls, whatever it is, 'Bailey' is a must!

jtw0978jtw0978almost 7 years ago

This was great please add to this

Omart57Omart57about 6 years ago
This is so Hot!

Great story, I too hope you continue this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Amazing

I’m normally not big on incest stories but this one was really really good! It’s hard finding well written stories from a woman’s point of view, so I’m certainly glad I found this. The massage’s description was a great build up with an equally great payoff. Also that final line was hilarious, made me legitimately laugh out loud. 10/10

linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago
Excellent

Very well done and Austin's comment at the end was priceless.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Goddamn I need more..

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