by BlueSkiesRedEyes
I've read through a lot of comp entries and this was the only one I liked. You weaved the threads nicely, the lesbian scene was a nice touch and I liked the twists at the end too. Would have deserved much higher score. Please keep writing.
Thank you so much for your kind words! I really enjoyed writing this story and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!
Holy snap, there were a lot of twists. I have never read such a complex story under 5 pages, yet you did it perfectly without making it feel rushed. Great story, keep on writing and I will be checking out your other stories.
I very much enjoyed this. Nicely written with an ambitiously complicated plot.
Oh so good, but feel short-changed with no sequel.
Many thanks for the really good read.