All Comments on 'The Shapechanger'

by BlueSkiesRedEyes

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AnetteSnowAnetteSnowover 3 years ago
Very enjoyable

I've read through a lot of comp entries and this was the only one I liked. You weaved the threads nicely, the lesbian scene was a nice touch and I liked the twists at the end too. Would have deserved much higher score. Please keep writing.

BlueSkiesRedEyesBlueSkiesRedEyesover 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you so much for your kind words! I really enjoyed writing this story and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!

DavyWavy533DavyWavy533over 3 years ago

Holy snap, there were a lot of twists. I have never read such a complex story under 5 pages, yet you did it perfectly without making it feel rushed. Great story, keep on writing and I will be checking out your other stories.

coldcomfortcoldcomfortover 3 years ago

I very much enjoyed this. Nicely written with an ambitiously complicated plot.

XericXericabout 3 years ago

Wicked cool story with a nice horrific twist. Good writing.

DarkCoco69DarkCoco69almost 3 years ago

Loved the twists! It is well written and doesn't feel rushed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Oh so good, but feel short-changed with no sequel.

Many thanks for the really good read.

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For anyone who remembers the series that got me started (The Succubus Upstairs), I'll be releasing the entire novel here on LE sometime close to March 27th. I wish I could provide an exact date, but it's hard to say how long after submitting a story gets published on this sit...