All Comments on 'The Shave'

I think you had "too much going on" while being shaved. Her kissing your nipples and other stuff, while performing her main task, would prevent her from paying attention, while she had a potentially dangerous object near your sensitive areas. Other than that superb descriptions and word choice.

The double-hit of "mound" in the 2 penultimate paragraphs, followed by the even more clumsy double-use of "flesh" in the final line were striking. You could've used "mons", "skin", even "pussy" in any of those places, but apparently got stuck in a thesaural rut! It seems oddly amateurish compared to your usual writing calibre. 🤔

quite erotic to say the least.

Not good. No shaving without the owner's permission. If the kitten says no, then you don't shave her. The rest of it is crap. No one wants to be co-ersed or forced to be shaved. Lesbianism is not meant to be that forceful.

Not little story and one exciting bath

I loved it! I was a huge fan of the Seduced series, love having this little extra to read!

Debbie is still a cheater and Brianna is still a homewrecker.

Missed this nicely done short follow up to Seduced … series, which was outstanding. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Brianna will always be a Homewrecker and destroyer of a marriage. Debbie is a Cheater and worthless parent, buying her daughter's affection against her father with a car. You always seem to write the male, as less than understanding,

Thanks and loved this little afterward. I have just finished all your lesbian stories and they are all so different, all riveting stories and the sex varied and great. Please continue as you are so gifted.

I know writers sometimes get names muddled but when readers get the names wrong it makes you wonder if they have really read the main story???

nice addition to the original storey, too short though. another side storey could follow the exploits of the daughter Debbie?

UUH...? They both got Brazillions back when they first got together....