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Boyd PercyBoyd Percy10 months ago

Exactly how it should end!

5

oldsage_1oldsage_110 months ago

Just the last step in the cycle of life.

Thank you

Cheers

SAGE

(AKA Tom)

mainer42mainer4210 months ago

well done thank you

stewartbstewartb10 months ago

My tears come to easily.

chytownchytown10 months ago

*****Very touching read. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Darn allergies - making my eyes water.

Very Well Done.

Rbtctrl1957Rbtctrl195710 months ago

The reason I only gave it 3 is just too much pain from the memories

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Nice story I guess but when I go I hope it is not because I was still working a "Honey-do" list. Let her next husband finish the chores.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago
his work here is done

"his work here on earth is done" brings tears to my eyes every time i here it @ a funeral 5 *

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I like to write and started writing erotica some years back as an exercise to improve my descriptions of things and actions. I guess I want to see if I have any talent at writing and to improve what little I probably do have.