All Comments on 'The Shepherd's Daughter'

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dinkymacdinkymacover 8 years ago
Excellent!

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love this story! Keep writing.

Great story, or myth, I will remember it with great pleasure for a long time go come.

Zodia195Zodia195about 7 years ago

I do enjoy tales like this. It's short and sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Damn fine

A lovely balance of story and sex. Nicely flowing, with natural dialog. Great ending.

luedonluedonover 5 years ago
Superb

Now that's the kind of story I like. Most imaginative and well written.

Lue

Ps: A personal peeve. Plants have seeds. Men produce semen.

Men who "spend his seed into her belly" leave me to wonder what may sprout forth after germination.

(My other peeve is wives who scream in LW stories "Fuck my married pussy" causing me to wonder about whether her other bits have remained single.)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

One of my favorite stories, took me forever to find it again 🤣

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

A really good story, well told.

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A random writer of short fiction, trying for longer stuff lately.