All Comments on 'The Shieldmaidens Lover Pt. 01'

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avengilineavengilineover 5 years ago
Please ignore the ignore the buffoon's comment

This story, has obviously continued and so far, I think it's going to be one I like. Endings tend to come quickly and in all honesty, in real life, are almost always rushed. Read on behold the future of Elwyn and Marcus.

Jackspeed2uJackspeed2uover 6 years ago
Don’t bother, a pathetic ending written in about 5 minutes

Well what a letdown. A great and detailed story, however the ending was a quick “ and they all lived happily ever after”

Don’t bother with this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
LOVE IT

I just read part 1. I loved it. I was going to put off reading part 2 another day but I can't just wait to find out what happens next.

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenover 15 years ago
I really like this

It's well written and well told.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
why the 14 year gap?

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
great story

Great story , sweet one. I look forward to the rest of this "epic" and to the many more you will create in the future *wicked smile*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great story!

You have a great story here and I'm looking forward to read the next part. I want (need) to see what happen next to Elwyn(Diana). Thanks for sharing this story.

tartan9tartan9almost 16 years ago
Excellent Story!

I so liked your well written story and look forward to reading more about your interesting characters!

Wishing you continued success with your writing.

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