by Sirens_Cry
This story, has obviously continued and so far, I think it's going to be one I like. Endings tend to come quickly and in all honesty, in real life, are almost always rushed. Read on behold the future of Elwyn and Marcus.
Well what a letdown. A great and detailed story, however the ending was a quick “ and they all lived happily ever after”
Don’t bother with this one.
I just read part 1. I loved it. I was going to put off reading part 2 another day but I can't just wait to find out what happens next.
Great story , sweet one. I look forward to the rest of this "epic" and to the many more you will create in the future *wicked smile*
You have a great story here and I'm looking forward to read the next part. I want (need) to see what happen next to Elwyn(Diana). Thanks for sharing this story.
I so liked your well written story and look forward to reading more about your interesting characters!
Wishing you continued success with your writing.