All Comments on 'The Shieldmaidens Lover Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Just enthralling!

I am really enjoying your well written story and look forward to the next chapter.

Wishing you continued success with your writing!

bad_girl69bad_girl69over 15 years ago
Beyond Amazing

This seems so much like an enchanting story. I just love it so much. Ewlyn and Marcus seem so cute together :) Please i hope you can continue with the next chapter soon. I really would like to know now what will happen in the Kings court.

Now i wonder if anyone will notice who Ewlyn is? hmmm...

owairakaowairakaover 15 years ago
Simply beautiful.

You write with such a beautiful flow. I am enjoying Marcus and Elwyns journey thus far. Keep up the great work, and I hope to be seeing another chapter here in the not too distant future. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

“You already have my heart, you rouge” LOL! Ok, I confess that did make me laugh out loud, but I doubt it was written that way intentionally. Rogue is what you meant, I'm sure.

Jackspeed2uJackspeed2uover 6 years ago
Don’t bother, pathetic ending written in about 5 minutes

Well what a letdown. A great and detailed story, however the ending was a quick “ and they all lived happily ever after”

Don’t bother with this one.

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