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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Just little mistakes.

You write 'David was stood in front of her" which would mean someone would have stood him there.

It would have been better to have said Davud was standing.

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Always been obsessed with stockings and heels. These combined with water sports is my absolute heaven. I like nothing more than to drink nectar from a nylon clad lady. FFNs preferred. Love to read about them, other people's adventures and participate. Would love my job to be ...