All Comments on 'The Shooting Party'

I really liked this - I have posted some myself under the name Ed Roberts - Check em out. Some are true! My wife would have shown her big tits like the lady in this story - she did it a lot. A huge show off!

edsandy3@yahoo.com

A fun sexy romp. Enjoyed it.

Graphic, educatex and mature story. Loved the build up, the scene setting and attention to detail even prjor to the excellent graphic sex scenes! Hope to read yku published books on Amazon next!

Oh my!!

You really have a talent for making the reader get worked up and hornier than ever and after reading your previous story then this....I’m hooked on your work! Plus that pic is deliciously took as well...

A fan

That's the way to write a bit of erotica: technically well written and good background. I love the way you create the social dynamics purely through dialog. The POV of the main character is perfect, as is her casual way of enjoying the two lads. Well done!