All Comments on 'The Short Arm Exam'

by OldDog

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Seriously in need of an editor...

but your story was unique to say the least.

sexysmilesexysmilealmost 16 years ago
Hot little story!

I liked it, but was distracted by multiple errors that could have easily been correctly by proofreading, including punctuation problems and skipped and misspelled words ("farted at a weeding"). Still, though, I liked it. The ending made me smile!

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