All Comments on 'The Show'

Not really sure what to say, tbh.

Was longer than it needed to be, but I somewhat enjoyed it, I spotted a few grammar mistakes but none that really detracted from the story all that much though the ending was a little wonky, all things considered I'd give you 3.5* if I could so instead I leave 3

Yeah.......ok

What????? Weird.

The general idea for your story was very interesting, Hope you write more.

I know this isn’t s serious story trying to imitate real life. By knowing that you can appreciate it for the fun sexy story it is.

Oh and unlike many stories here it’s complete.

Thank you for this different but enticing story. It works on several levels; I hav to say i’m A fan of mother/son incest, and this does it in spades. Well worth every one of five stars, more if they were available!

It started off OK. Sadly it turned weird with a new contract, virtually every day. Towards the end it turned into more gibberish than a story.

Sans all the trans BS I actually liked the story. Even the old woman preggo ending thing(Though I don't understand the appeal of being with an older women if she doesn't look like one but regardless), decent story overall, just not the trans angle.

Add something like "and generates synthetic sperm based on the genetic information from her ovaries" please! Otherwise it breaks the suspended disbelief

I really liked this story, keep up the good work

Very interesting premise and well written, thank you.

It's like PornHub did their own version of 'The Running Man'. Very creative and well-written (editing could have been a tiny bit better). Good premise, characters, and world-building. And I very much appreciate the epilogues wrapping things up at the end. Truly enjoyed this story. 5/5* Fav

I notice that you made some mistakes in your plot. If I understand it correctly, you noted that incest cannot be prosecuted as long as it is part of the show "double or nothing". The show ended with the mother becoming pregnant. Therefore, any contact that the son has with the mother outside of the show is punishable. However, there is no reaction whatsoever. Secondly, the father has the option to divorce and thus claim 50% of the joint property.

And thirdly, you forget that with the millions he then has, he has every opportunity to get rid of his ex-wife and son forever. And why shouldn't he do that?

A well-told story isn't very good if things don't turn out as advertised! A pity!