All Comments on 'The Shower'

The situation, tension and dialogue were all very well written. You also handled the NC without being rapey, which is appreciated. 5 * s

Very nicely done! My guess is outdoors will be just as welcome, but what do I know? --JB Edwards

I appreciated the accurate grammar and witty dialogue of the situation. There's nothing worse than a story that would be good if it was only written a smidgen better. I appreciate the effort. Also, it was incredibly sexy

the hell is a rose and what part of a shower is it? totally fucked up the story for me

A rose is the shower head, the part that the water comes out of in a lovely spray. :)