All Comments on 'The Shy One Ch. 04'

I love your writing. This story is nice, but I want to stab Lisa. Sorry, but that how she makes me feel.

...as always. The simile with cats was really evocative; kind of put an image of a very self-satisfied smile, and the arch of her neck as he took her from behind. Beautiful imagery. Lisa is such an instigator! I get the feeling that she'd be even more dangerous if she were an enemy.

i'm not the only one who wants Lisa dead. :) thanks for the quick update.