All Comments on 'The Shy Spider Ch. 01'

by BigKatBoi

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

And then ???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Good beginning. Looking forward to the next chapter. You have a few typos and tense mistakes, but other than that, good story.

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