All Comments on 'The Sibling Diaries Ch. 03'

Wow, you are good at this!

the electric discharge from cloud to earth is LIGHTNING. lightening is irrelevant in the context. otherwise, grammar and spelling not too bad.

All I can say is WOW! Thats one hell of an anniversary present. Other than a couple of spelling/editing errors I thought it was well written. Keep up the good work.

I love the unpredictability of your story.