All Comments on 'The Sibling Diaries Pt. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

like the story - but that is not how pregnancy works...

Doctorwho89Doctorwho89over 2 years ago

Great stuff as always and the grammatical errors are now few and far between! keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Continues to be a good story! But proofread and spell check more completely. Couple awkward sentences.

Nmb11Nmb11over 2 years ago

Great Story

I can’t wait to see where it leads

You could continue through them attending the same college as a couple

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 2 years ago

The sex is hot as is the character dynamics. One issue I have is in a situation like this story where the writer is pushing the reader to believe this is just a "siblings with benefits" relationship. Where both love each other and are sexually attracted to each other, it will invariably morph to a tru loving relationship. We'll see where this leads...5*

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
FINALLY!!

At least Emily did not let Alex down.

Rose disappointed me. He defended her honor and took an unfair punishment.

Her answer…..let’s be friends .

I hope things will change.

Alex deserves her Cherry!!

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
FINALLY!!!!

Alex deserves the sex with Emily.

Great writing.

Love the way you move the characters around. First Emily will put out, then not.

Why isn't Emily on the PILL? What sexually active email is not on the pill or if not, has condoms or an IUD in her purse or dorm room.

Some times she plays like a very sexually active girl and then seems like she is not putting out.

Can't wait for more action.

starfight22starfight22over 2 years ago

Hope the next part is released soon. Really like the way it goes.

OseekerOseeker7 days ago

Wish that Rose & the others had been left out of this story.

Nice to gave an insatiable sister...

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