by TommyTales
Great stuff as always and the grammatical errors are now few and far between! keep it up!
Continues to be a good story! But proofread and spell check more completely. Couple awkward sentences.
Great Story
I can’t wait to see where it leads
You could continue through them attending the same college as a couple
The sex is hot as is the character dynamics. One issue I have is in a situation like this story where the writer is pushing the reader to believe this is just a "siblings with benefits" relationship. Where both love each other and are sexually attracted to each other, it will invariably morph to a tru loving relationship. We'll see where this leads...5*
At least Emily did not let Alex down.
Rose disappointed me. He defended her honor and took an unfair punishment.
Her answer…..let’s be friends .
I hope things will change.
Alex deserves her Cherry!!
Alex deserves the sex with Emily.
Great writing.
Love the way you move the characters around. First Emily will put out, then not.
Why isn't Emily on the PILL? What sexually active email is not on the pill or if not, has condoms or an IUD in her purse or dorm room.
Some times she plays like a very sexually active girl and then seems like she is not putting out.
Can't wait for more action.
Wish that Rose & the others had been left out of this story.
Nice to gave an insatiable sister...