All Comments on 'The Side Car'

You had me going a bit at first---I thought Lainey and Marnie were dead and in some kind of story-tellers' after life. Then it dawned on me and I realised what was going on. An unusual, intriguing and very clever idea. Funny thing, when I'm writing I often imagine my characters are really alive in some kind of alternate universe but it would never have occurred to me to commit the idea to print. Keep going, CeVin---I think you'll become a real asset to this site.

Absolutely lovely! You have the gift. I wish I could write like that. Now I have to go and think about my side characters ...

...especially with a story like this one, and from commenters like y'all! Thank you!

Truthfully, the comments I got from test readers were mostly along the lines of "I don't get it," and "so, wait, ummm..?" so I'm not expecting super high ratings.

Seriously though: Thank You!

Loved it, especially how the memories came as the character "thought" about the back story and Voila it happens. Very creative and yet fun. Bravo

im one of the less attentive readers but i do think you will be asset to this site i wish you well shayne