All Comments on 'The Silken Slit of the Empress Ch. 04'

You have continued good writing with great descriptions and short, succinct dialogue. Leo's, out-of-place and time, moral standards add to the heat of Antonina's selfish need. Aside from the fact that they never got into her bed chambers and he never was unclothed, the long succulent blow job was well done although a woman's tongue could not do some of the things suggested. Those are minor technocratic points that do not detract from the action. The sequel will continue, and Helena will eventually get what she wants and deserves.

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