All Comments on 'The Silver Guardian Bk. 01 Ch. 17'

Not bad not bad.

My man , get to it , till you copied orphan , there was movement , now last 5 chapters is all bs , move it , we need a cause , a villain and some new charecters . I have followed the story as I loved it , but you missed the 2 best scenes from the original : the baby girl wolf who knows , The strorm scene : so make amends. IT IS A HOMAGE STORY. THE WHOLE LITEROTICA WORLD WANTS IT COMPLETED.

The author acknowledged South Mountain Pack as one of his inspirations in a comment, but he should put a foreward and acknowledge PBL and SMP because he basically took her ideas and used them. Will have to go back and read Orphan again, because I feel as if I've read some of this before and not the SMP parts.

For those who enjoyed it thank you and glad you like it. For those who don’t there is plenty of other stuff to read ;)