All Comments on 'The Singer Pt. 03'

I felt that I was right there, a fly on the wall watching, feeling the tension. Wonderful writing!

An intriguing chapter, Shaima, thoughtful and erotic. Thoughtful for its discussion of religion and homosexuality and erotic for a beautifully described seduction scene. Possibly one of your best pieces of writing to date and I'm agog to see where you are taking the story. I must say that your 'uniquely Aussie' dim sims sound very much like the Chinese dim sums, also a stuffed dumpling which can be steamed or deep fried.

Hmm, I'm feeling anxious about the uncertainty of this relationship, especially in lieu of the fact they just slept together. This will end well or someone will get hurt. I don't want the later for either woman. My hope is that they can both Sing off into the sunset. But people in hell want ice water too (religious pun intended). Like you, I just have to wait and see what happens. In the interim, another fantastic job Shaima

Fantastic read. Mmmm.

This is fascinating ... so well written

Thank you sharing the complexity of human existence.

I gotta say not what is was expecting yet expecting. Also the ending kinda sucks not guna lie

The high and lows of Gay and straight! It’s going wonderfully though! Thank you!

I enjoyed your story and the hint of things to come. Well written too.

Thank you.

You draw the reader in with your brilliant writing and character driven stories. I have to say I have read ALOT of intimate/ sex scenes but Linda and Rowena's first time was right up there vying for number one spot. Thank you

Jc