All Comments on 'The Single Mothers Club Ch. 01'

Please keep it going

Good stuff I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see how this plays. I'm not to sure how I feel about her pimping the MC out yet.

please keep going can't wait for part 2

Don’t stop here!

5*

Tc

Great fishing story it has me hook line and sinker.

More please?

Would have liked a little more relationship with Ashley. Maybe a chapter 2 with more adventures with the other Moms and more with Ashley.

Excellent, more,more more

1. I am not sure if this story is under incest category because it is a step-mom

2. If author lives in the U.S. (SF) then he would use American "apartment" instead of British "flat".

Yes, I like this story but I posted some little corrections

Good story. Thank you for sharing it. More chapters would work, but not necessary. It is a complete story.

Well done!~ I agree that a second chapter would be a good idea here!

Great story.

I agree with others I would like more with Ashely…..:but man really good.

Delightful, can't wait for further instalments.

Good story, enjoyed it much. Ashley will need more of him after hearing the stories from the other moms.

This is a really good story. Can hardly wait for the next chapter!

Great work hope to see more Lupe there was no penetration

I want Ansel and Ashley to end up together at the end. That said, this was perfection because finally, finally, someone understands how to write about making the woman orgasm before intercourse. If more men did this, there would be happier people everywhere.

The Ashley part was good. Had the Lupe part been as good it would have received 5 stars. Keep at it. Well written.

Great story!! keep going

Isn't it pretty messed up for a person, even a grieving one, to seduce some one and then the next day say, "Thanks but we will never do that again?" 3/5

What’s pretty messed up is some “Anonymous” dickhead not understanding FANTASY such a fucking moron

I'm looking forward to Part 2!

I want to thank everyone for the comments. Because of your encouragement, I'm working on a Chapter 2, and I have plans for at least a few more after that!

Excellent!

Very good story. While not totally new premise, you've touched on some great possibilities. I'm heading to chapter two, hoping you continue your great start.

Nice series, maybe John and Kimberly can become the swing party hosts in ch3 and Ansel can become a party favor for a 1/2 dozen of the women you’ve mentioned from the club :)

I got half way through this story and it began to sound familiar. I’m pretty sure I’ve read this before, but I enjoyed it again. It’s one of the perks of being an old geezer. Anyway, thanks for an excellent story.

Lost me on Page 2, when he "began to feel head" between her legs.

That's even more wrong than the actual story itself!