All Comments on 'The Sins of the Fathers Ch. 17'

She is getting the short end of the stick!!! Come on!!! Let her have at least Mack's Daddy. Be fair!!!!!!!!!

This one was ELEGANTLY DONE! Perfect.

Yet another top chapter. Such a contrast to the last one, I loved the way you had Mac ask her questions, how Spencer squirmed as he 'thought out' his answers.

I can't wait for Jack and Nikki to get together again. In my mind they seem a more natural couple than any of the mixes we've seen so far. or even thode that have been suggested.

Thanks.

Look for the latest chapter every day - read it first.

DYING to know how it comes out!!!

I miss the longing and the heat and the love written with humor about Jack and Nikki.

Did any of that help their situation, possibly not, does it ease any sense of guilt? No. Was it necessary for the story probably. How can one separate out what is happening in business life and almost parallels in ones personal life . Very well crafted story. In terms of eroticism I'd give it 3out of 5.

What a wonderfully caring but, so erotic end to that chapter beautifully written.

As always five stars. The difference between Paul Traynor and Jack and Spence ?

Love.