by Fatherlyneed
Yeah, that's exactly what you're doing. And it's working. We want more. Well, I do, anyway.
Once again you've woven another amazing chapter of this amazing story.
I've said before you have a way with words. You know just how to describe a situation to the max.
At last it looks as if Jack and Nikki are gonna get it together. I hope before the stories end we get a Jack, Jess and Nikki romp.
I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted.
Thanks
Love the visual telling of this chapter. Pure mind games and I loved it. Can't wait to see where this ends up.
I have to say that i look forward to each part of the storie, love it
This is great I like stories with depth. Some of these stories are wham bam thank you mam. This one could stand up with the romance novels. Can not wait for another chapter.
Sorry but I only gave this 4 stars. For the 2nd time you made me go shopping and I HATE SHOPPING!!! I was born without the shopping gene and avoid it at all costs. Now where is the next chapter(s)??
That's what you guys call shopping? That was an author going through an entire chapter of foreplay with his readers. I nearly slipped off my chair. That's not shopping. That's damned near fornication!