All Comments on 'The Sirens of Rising Springs Spa'

by Sparrow9642

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

You have a talent for being sexually descriptive which makes the sex seem all the hotter which in turn makes the story better. You even managed to give minimal descriptions of the women but it didn’t subtract from the story whatsoever. Nicely done and thanks for your 5* story.

Sparrow9642Sparrow9642about 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you! One of my weaknesses in writing is character description, so I tried to make their description vague, but descriptive enough to where the reader would know what to picture. Glad you liked the story!

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I'm a 28 year old male looking to get a career in audiobook narration going. I narrate audiobooks on YouTube, mainly horror stories, play guitar, and am just your casual everyday nice guy who's just looking to make friends.