The Sisters

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For the next 2 years, I will be going out and dating other women. The same amount of time you were cheating on me. I will be very discreet and will not rub you nose in it but it will happen. You will not see any other men during this time. You will only have sex with me. If at any time I find that you have been with someone else, man or woman the divorce papers will be filed.

Do you have any questions so far?

Is there any way I can make this up to you without you seeing other women?

I don't know is there? You tell me how you can take away the hurt and the knowledge that you were having sex with someone else for 2 years. I want you to hurt as I do. If you can come up with a plan let me know and we will talk about it. She never did offer any other solution. I am sure she knew there was nothing she could do. I would not have changed the terms.

With you seeing other woman I am concerned about STDs.

I will always use a condom when I'm with someone else. If I am seeing someone, I will be checked at least once a month. If it makes you feel better I will use a condom with you also.

Two more conditions. Because right now I do not trust you. You will have to wear a GPS ankle bracelet. You will never take it off unless I am with you. I have to build my trust up again. This will help me. I will know if you take it off. If you do take it off we are done. You have to remember this is your fault. If you had not fucked Jeff we would still be a happy family.

Dan I have only has sex with Jeff and you. Never anyone else. I don't see why I need to wear it.

It is to make me feel better. Remember I have no way to know for sure Jeff is the only one you did this with. I want to believe it with all my heart. However, my heart is broken right now. Therefore, I need a lot of help to get it put back together again. I am not totally convinced you two are telling me the truth. You had days to come up with a good story and this may be it.

This last condition would be the one that would hurt her the most if she did love Jeff. If it was more than just sex this would kill her. This one is non-negotiable.

The last one. You will never see Jeff again, never contact him, or emailing him. No phone calls. If I see you look at him, you can go live with him.

I watched her face intently as told her the last one. I think I noticed some pain but I was not sure.

She said, "I was only with Jeff, I have never been with anyone but you and him. "How many woman will you see?" She asked.

"I don't know. Maybe none, maybe 20. I just don't know how many it will take to make me feel right again." I knew doing this would not fix anything. But I just wanted her to suffer like I have. I don't even know if I could go through with having sex with other women. But she didn't know that.

Jeff was served with alienation of affection papers. Nothing will come out of the suit against Jeff. However, I wanted to humiliate him in some way.

Sher signed the papers and didn't fight the terms of the divorce. My lawyer will keep the papers in case I ever decide to file them.

Jeff sold his house and moved away. I don't know where and I don't care.

Her talk with her parents and our boys went very badly. As you would have expected. The boys refused to talk to her for months. But in time they did forgive her. It will take a long time for them to get back to the mother sons relationship they had before.

Her parents wanted to disown her. But I intervened on her behalf. I asked them, if they really wanted to lose their last daughter. Yes what she did was bad, very bad. But know Sher was their only daughter. They needed to hold on to her.

The boys did start to talk to their mother again. But the relationship isn't what it was.

Almost forgot about the police. They said that because there was no foul play in Barbs death, they didn't think that there really was anything to arrest them for so they let it drop. I disagreed, but the DA refused to press any charges.

I also started to talk to Sher. I miss my wife of 2 years ago. I still love her. Will we ever get back to the way we were? I don't know. I still hurt, but the anger is gone. Maybe the next story will be about us getting totally back together or divorcing.

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Just_WordsJust_Words5 months ago

I get the revenge angle, but why not turn them into the police even if charges won't stick and divorce her? Shes not worth the effort.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago
Sir Thopas Tribute Tales

For dummies.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Meh

Not even close to original. At worst, it's a direct copy. A poor copy of a bad original.

Why she left her family to live with Jeff while pretending to be her sister was never satisfactorily explained. His solution of "I'll be your jailer, you'll be my sex slave" was weak writing.

Overall, this had a feeling of being rushed, maybe out of fear that someone saw the copying of someone else's work. ie; SirThopas' "In Memoriam".

QuintiusQuintiusabout 4 years ago
Good plot, poor execution.

This story started out really well. They've been done before but I actually really enjoy mysteries and LW stories with twins who are switching places. This is the first I've ever read where there was a case of mistaken identity with a death involved, so I was quite intrigued. Unfortunately, the story was not well written at all. The dialogue was spotty as though it was quickly typed out and half of it wasn't even dialogue in the strictest sense, i.e. had no quotations, wasn't in the proper format, etc... Although the emotions were evident, the scenes lacked any real impact because there was no actual indication of what the people were feeling or how they were reacting physically other than a few references.

The other complaint I have is that the story ends far too quickly and there's no real resolution one way or another. Too many questions still remain at the end and given we don't even learn if the couple divorces or not, this is very unsatisfying. The whole narrative reads like more of a long outline in which Sam3501 jots down ideas and the more important pieces of dialogue but doesn't really create a full story. I still would have given this passing marks for the originality had there been more of an acceptable conclusion and far, far more details about what happened and how the characters reacted. About half of this story is being told to the reader rather than shown and that's not very interesting.

Full marks for ideas, I just wish the author had done something more entertaining with them.

WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShitover 4 years ago

Something important is missing. There’s still no reason why Sher assumed Barb’s identity. She didn’t love Jeff, but was willing to live her life with him (without her sons or husband), to avoid hurting her husband and sons? So it’s easier for them to deal with death, than betrayal?

That just doesn’t work.

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