All Comments on 'The Sixth School Ch. 050'

"The game is afoot"...

Happy to read this chapter.

Waiting for the next

Your story is so good that I feel the need for more. Every chapter is like bite size. I wish for a longer chapter but thank you anyway for sharing your gift.

Truly a sexy political masterpiece.

Keep writing please

MORE!!!!!

Someone picked the wrong person to follow.

As for his concerns about taking risks, fair enough. Still, he might be able to buy some sort of protective talisman or the like from the shop - that ought to be sufficient to keep his family safe from nonmagical assassins.

It would be advantageous to get enough Lust points to merge his feats sooner rather than later. You never know when the status quo will disrupted by external forces.

Good sense prevailed over lust.

Need to investigate why are they being followed, and by who?

Again, wonderful story. Small point, Shalia refer Roka as Greg, is she aware? Other than that, perfect chapter.

I really like the way this story is going. Your writing is impeccable, and I appreciate gaining a perspective on the motivations of all of the characters but not enough to know what will happen until it does. 5s

trying to figure out whether Niya or her mother

should be

Naiya, (not the brother.)

As always a great read. Unfortunate that the 2 pages go so fast. Can't wait to see where this ends up.

Cannot wait for the action

You continue to intrigue ...

eagerly waiting for the continuation

Still really enjoying this.

Loving how the plot continues to evolve.

Many thanks for sharing with us all.

Intrigues on intrigues! This has been a delightful read. Very much looking forward to unmitigated debauchery as the story progresses. After binge-reading the full set when you had 48 chapters up, I've been kept on the hook. I won't ask for preferential consideration: you've got a framework that can go in any direction. Keep writing! I'm interested to see what develops.

The pain of another Humpday is eased again!

Interesting happenings. I guess those dungeon crawls are coming in handy. I think as his magic gets better he can use the dungeon as a hyperbolic time chamber. Since time spent there is slower than real time. He can get more practice in there than than in real life. I think that would help his magic immensely.

Good chapter. Interesting to see how being with Greg has awoken or strengthened another person’s magic or magical affinity. Can’t wait to see how things continue to develop. Keep up the good work.

I have been avidly following your great story. Yes! Do not change anything. Certainly do not follow the advice of trolls who does not have the capacity to write something like this or the appreciation of the effort that you are putting in.

My one suggestion to you is maybe change some of the tags/category of your story. I notice that you all have them all at Scifi Fantasy but there are certain chapters here that can qualify to some other categories like Non Consent/Reluctance, Mature and Incest/Taboo. By doing this, you may actually capture additional readers since some readers (like myself) only look / or look more often at stories from specific categories.

Again this is just a suggestion. Please keep on writing. You have already created a character in a world that has endless possibilities. The great thing about this story is you are only at the very beginning of your story line. I am assuming that the Sixth School that you are referring to is the another school of magic that you are just slowly introducing to the readers. So all we are seeing right now is the very tip of the iceberg.

Binged the first 50 chapters, now I can't wait for the next one!

One flutters one's lashes, not flatters them. Two places.

took me three enjoyable evenings to go through your creation and i thank you for it, this is great material. insightful & surprising ... Some long sections between question & reply ie. in chapter on Greg being a healer (Alena explanations) .. but still very entertaining and creative , again lots of love :)

Oh, maybe a cliff hanger I have to wait and see thank you again

Flutter , flatter , flitter . Whatever . Another anonymous genius . Lol .

Good work!!!

You keep on surprising me. Thanks!!!

Damn, been a while since I left a comment. Whoo boy do I enjoy your series :) In the beginning I was doubting if it would be entertaining enough, but you have me hooked. Looking for what you have in store for us

While the Chapters are short they are packed with excitement and adventure. While one might think this chapter is mundane reading the entire preceeding chapters and thinking about future ones shows that this is a charactor building chapter not to be despised.

Approval is all I can say. I agree with the other comments about how you pack a lot in little chapters. Well done!

Too bad about the Valla mother. Seems she could use the help honestly.

Really enjoying this story