by BlaQQuill
Ah, the pleasure and pain of bite-sized prose. I look forward to more! Interesting lead-in to new "training" scenes, with mountains, oceans, and rivers of lust points just on the horizon.
It's Tuesday. Nearly had a panic attack thinking it was Wednesday 😂.
Brilliant chapter like always!
Healer: "Roka, I really don't care if you decide to fuck every single woman in this town"
She is one of those women ,,, In fact she is single ...
Our author is a man of a very good taste ;)
Highlight of the chapter for me was when he was teasing Enya.
This story is starting to come into its own. I really like that you're now elapsing more time between some of these chapters. And that there are fewer 'knowledge transfer only' chapters. While you still expound on rules of the world, the structure of magic, workings of the 'system', etc., when needed to understand the motivations of characters or future decisions of Greg/ Roka, they are now more interspersed with plot.
It has become a truly enjoyable read, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take the story.
Another excellent chapter. Can’t wait to see how his conversation with the healer continues. Again you give us just enough to keep us wanting more. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
I just love it,! I think things are gonna get very interesting soon.
Thanks
Shapachan
Don't you dare stop 😁
I have read a LOT of the longer story lines here, and much prefer them to wham bam lines.
Really enjoying the structure and development taking place.
ChrisR
Less knowledge dumps means more focus on “present” story matters. Exciting
Unexpected Shalia was large breasted
I like this reminder of Alena having such long life and how that changes things.
My first low confidence guess for the stalker is just the Valla boy. He's just the most obvious, and obviously lots of folk are possible. Even Olivia, testing or poor boy.