All Comments on 'The Sixth School Ch. 052'

Another good chapter. I don't know how you manage to keep on schedule every week, you might be the only author here that does so with such regularity and rapid pace. It is comforting to know, when finishing a chapter, that another will be along shortly.

GR8 chapter .

This is so hot, can't wait for the next chapter.

damm cliff hanger....love it

In another world, I would have loved to listen to Alena share stories about her life. My heart is filled with bittersweet feelings of ulterior motives from Greg. Everything in this world has almost two meanings to it, and I have little doubt that Greg sharing a meal with Alena every few days is an exception to this rule. I want to read of her smiling, but if I do I also will think of a wide grin from Greg, watching her resistance break away. Or something. She is a very old high tier after all.

Love it. My only complaint is having to wait until the next chapter. You leave is hanging so beautifully well that it’s frustrating. Keep up the good work and keep them coming

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It can be difficult to write about the alien mind of ancient beings... but it's also important to realize that, unless they change their root mechanisms, they'll still behave like the younger variants from time to time. It's good to be reminded of that juxtaposition, like we see with Alena... and the somewhat pervasive concepts of psychology (in Greg's modern world) being applied with a mind toward ethics. Ah, the lure of power and the inevitable war of self that it creates. It'll be really interesting to see how these experiences impact Greg's "plan". I wonder if/when Greg will begin to think of himself as Roka. The daily reminders and overlapping memories dealing with this village and all the pretending could begin to erode the boundary between his identities. Even a compartmentalized memory storage space may not be able to stop that kind of fragmentation. Hmmm...

Great chapter. I continue to enjoy this story and look forward to another chapter every week. I liked the progress with Greg and the healer’s relationship. I hope to see more progress with it as well as with his attainment of magic. Keep up the good work.

I actually love the incest elements, please don't let critics cause you to write less on that angle, it's exciting to see the buildup and the resistance crumbling to the base desires in the dynamic of the evolving relationship between the main character and his female family members

Great story, easy to read, captivating. You should write a book, no a trilogy or series based off of this. I’d buy it! I mean look how much material you have already and your characters have only begun their journey. Please don’t give in to the pressure to summarize, skip over things and/or rush to the end before you’re ready and the full story has been told.

Good story. Be careful with your pronouns; you called Greg a her on more than one occasion in the series.

Wonderfull keep going ..... read a few chapters last year , very enjoyable . thank you .

going to stop here on 52 , just so I can read more another time , yes keep going , I am

sure you can write a lot more , but have fun with it . Paul

Only 52 chapters to get on a first name basis! We got there!