All Comments on 'The Sky Kingdom Ch. 02'

Hello.

You have started a great story. If you keep up the level, it can be a great series. I'm looking forward to the continuation and am curious what happens to the young lady who also travels to the capital.

It's an interesting read so far. His name is Harry and Henry in places tho

I just wanna point out a typo, around the conversation with Jasper. You wrote "If I accept do her, I'll need another cabin" - I assume you meant to write "If I do accept her" for it to make sense.

I like the story so far, looking forward to seeing where you take it.

Thank you for the feedback and good spot on the typo. Just to clarify @Raeken, Harry is the informal nickname for Henry so it is meant to be a reflection of the characters relationships (he offers his name as Harry but is referred to as Henry). Should be clarified in the next chapter though!

I'm loving this series, so romantic, and such wonderful character development. You know from the category it's going to get juicy, and there are so many interesting characters lurking in the background. So many possibilities! One of the best i've read on Lit.

Normally, am not really that interested in magic based stories, but am glad to have sampled this piece. The relationship that may evolve between Harry and his intriguing little slave could be delicious. Bravos.