All Comments on 'The Sky Kingdom Ch. 12'

excellent. I was waiting after the last chapter and am now facing an even greater cliff hanger. Your writing style is superb

Well now it gets interisting. He had to convince dad to let him keep the girl even though he has that under control. then he has to get free of dad soon enough to get the other girl. before the fake slave stuff starts to wear off in a few days. but he does not plan to do that for a week. It is going to get very interisting very soon. 5 STARS and I can not bare to wait for the next installment please hurry.

Impatiently waiting for your next chapter! This is by far my favorite series!!

Your story is great! The editing could use some work though. (5 'as' in one sentence, a record!)

Great writing so far, I really like this story and your style of writing.

Thank you for your comments, I'm actually struggling to find any support from an editing perspective if anyone is interested. Please do message privately if you are!

thank you so much for these stories. I find myself coming back near daily, in hopes of a continuation. I enjoy your work greatly!

Doubt I could help with editing but you should know I am checking my followed authors daily for updates to this.

The plot doth thicken.