by Lemonweaseleye
Oh you are so going to have to continue :) i am sucked into the story. It's that well written..
He shoots and scores! 5 stars for you is getting to be a habit. ;)
I now hear John Crichton whenever John Wellington speaks, and Chiana's voice for Sky. Never a bad thing, since Gigi Edgley is gorgeously cute!
I love the FarScape elements you've thrown in, though. Keep up the great work. 5/5 :)
...the Farscape-ish type elements. Hopefully there's a way to reverse his skin coloration to be what it was originally, not sure I dig a blue Wellington.
It is greatly appreciated. If it hadnt been for all the positive feedback Ive received, I would have abandoned this story.
I'm still working on the next chapter and hope to have it up within the next couple of weeks.
Thanks again for all your support.
~Lem
I really like your story.....however you have to be careful about how much you copy together.The story feels like it has elements from Avatar, Farscape, Immortal and Dune all over the place.....still, please keep going
Why is it that so many really good stories end up being abandoned? I wish the author would finish this or someone else would.
Please continue, I very much enjoyed reading your storie. Please continue
Thank you