All Comments on 'The Slammer Sluts'

by Millsy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
oops!

Saw the ending coming, but it was still nice to imagine the look on his face.

Definitely a fun read.

bruce_parkerbruce_parkerover 9 years ago
LOOOOL

Nicely done man, the ending was very funny

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
WOW

First off. What a clever idea! To position a sexually deprived medic in a prison of sexually deprived and hungry women. Ingenious plot device. Made for Literotica -- like a made-for-TV movie.

The colorful chitchat between "Doc" and his "clients," including prison slang, made for entertaining and sometimes humorous reading as it rolled out the clever plot.

More on Millsy's interesting writing style in the opening remarks of my comment on Gym Lad.

The main problem with this story is that it was shorter than my interest. I want to hear about the new lady that Mandy kicked(!) to him, with some more about Emma, plus guard Sadie realizing what that noise really is and demanding a share of the action in order to keep her quiet. Maybe how it turns out with his wife.

I can imagine his divorce finalized on the same day as his prison temp job ends, which is also the day his preferred "Slammer Slut" is released from prison with no place to go. Maybe another Literotica writer could take this up, since Millsy, regrettably, left off writing over six years ago.

Another 5 star Millsy fun -- and sometimes funny -- tale.

Paul in Oklahoma

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