All Comments on 'The Slave Maker'

Nice story. A little difficult to read though. Sentences did not flow and was confusing some times. Not sure if it is a translation thing or what

It got heavy words the end, but giving the reader a happy ending helps. I’m guessing that English isn’t your first language?

You got it. English is not my native language.

I know there is not much twist in this story. It's more about Sabrina/Stephen inability to see what will happen to her/him despite it is the same as the previous girl.

I was emotional that Ericka disappeared and that Angela became cold. I'd cry.