All Comments on 'The Sleepover'

I enjoyed this story immensely. Your ability to write such vivid work with a good storyline is amazing! I hope you continue to keep this up! I give 5 stars for this piece of art.

- A pleasantly pleased reader.

'Nuff said! 5 Stars, of course.

RaM

One of the best that I have read.

This is definitely the best yet keep up the good writing

I liked it but I wanted to hear more about Alex

No not hot, but scorching even scalding. Yeah.

I thought this was good the first time I read it, but OMG! I agree with the other guy, not hot, SCORCHING!!! I can't wait to read whatever else you've written.

I love the story. Would like to see a follow up, especially with Alex and Brandon getting more steamy.

That is, without doubt, the best and hottest piece of sustained erotic writing I have ever read. Samslam, you are a master. It is literate, well-written, and hot as hell. Thank you and congratulations.

Fun read thank you!

This was a great story. It was very well written and edited. I'm not really interested in the incest part but liked the story just the same.

Very hot no wasted time getting the story going. It kept me hard for hours. Well written and held my interest thru the whole story.

Sequel should come.

The best story ive read in a long time 👍

What a marathon! And the ending was as joyful as the anticipation of the beginning! simply an orgy of joy and satisfaction!

Very good story, liked the story line and writing, very sexy.

This is one of the very few Literotica stories I've read twice, and it's still . . . well, stimulating. Sheer fantasy, the stuff of wanks and wet dreams. But then, fantasy is "the willing suspension of disbelief." People who says it's unbelievable are exactly right; but why? I know from experience that a guy can get off six or seven times (or more) within 24 hours, so that's not the unbelievable part. The unbelievable part is having four 18-year-olds so readily available, so aggressive and willing, with that mix of naivete and sluttiness, and who are that open to being watched while "doing the dirty." You're a pretty good writer, and the story is convincingly structured---given the basic unbelievability of the scenario. Makes me wonder if you could write non-porn too.

Threesome with Alex and Kylie would've been better

One of the best stories I've ever read. I really hope there is more of this story.

Best story ever. I loved it because it was really long and it had a lot of explaining about it.

Wish I were in Brandon's shoes. Great story and really well written. A 5.

Great story! ... outstanding character development ... I feel like I want to have some kind of relationship with each of these ladies ... all involving fucking their brains out of course. 😋 Enjoyed some wonderful "active fantasizing" while reading the section where Kristina was losing her virginity! ...

It was annoying how often they said I love you Ik it was for the ending but I thought it could've ended on a better note. It was creepy how often they talked about incest and how she was saying ily during the sex. Bc it was a familial love it just kind of made it sound dirty and disgusting

Intercourse between brother and sister can be very good, but is so much more fulfilling when the sex is coupled with love, with trying to give pleasure rather than just satisfying your own sexual needs.

Well written! 5 stars from me!

I love the way the coupling between Brandon and Lauren was built up, it made you really understand the desire between them. So fucking hot is all I have to say. This is why I keep coming back for more brother sister stories. Well done

With this already receiving 225 comments, you will probably never see this one. But man, what a hot story!!! I had 4 brothers (the oldest and the youngest are now in Heaven with our mom) and never thought about them like that. If I had, the oldest one would've been the one I'd have been interested in. He was 12 years older than me (we were 2 of 8 kids). This will forever remain one of my favorite stories (and authors for that matter). Can't wait to read the next part. Good Job!! 5 stars (only because it won't let me give more).

i masturbated 3 times while reading this story. more erotic stories to come, author!

i spurt 3 or 4 times for this hot story

That was simply scorching !

Your descriptions were amazing - I just wish I had had a sister with friends like Lauren when I was younger........

Well worth more than just 5 stars !

Rapier

This is soooo erotic! Great story line with an older guy in a harem of sexy teenage girls plus the incest bteween Brandon and Lauren. It's long though. Maybe it would be better split into separate chapters. I can't wait for the threesome sequel!

What a very sexy story also one of my favorites and am waiting for a sequel.

Incredible!

I cummed 3-5 times while reading this. So fucking good!

Such an incredible story! I can vividly picture it!

One question.

He was worried about making the girls pregnant and used a condom with the virgin. But unless I missed it he did not hesitate to fuck his sister bareback...there was never a question if she was on the pill as the other two were.

Yesss best story ever so far!!!

Really enjoyed it!

IT'S BEEN AWHILE SINCE I'VE READ THIS AND ENJOY IT VERY MUCH. YOU KNOW THERE IS SO MANY TERRIBLE CRITICS IN THE WORLD. THIS IS JUST ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES EVER. EXCELLENT JOB WRITING THIS ONE. 10 OUT OF 10 ON EVERY POINT!

I used to dry hump my step sister when she acted asleep then one day she slid her panties off without me knowing I was grinding on her as she slept and my dick slide inside I was like oh shit and she grabs my hip and holds me in and we’ve been sexually active ever since I was big spoon

If I can’t get pussy I can always go to my sisters and she’s gonna take care of me and I mean anytime any where I can fuck her or get my dick suck

Mmm.. I’ve been pinching my clit the whole time. The pussy taste test was my favorite part. I’d love to watch my friends get licked -....

The best story i've ever read!

I love how you tell a "story". it's not just one page of WHAM and that's it. very well thought out!

THE. BEST. STORY. EVER!

Well written, hate trying to read a story that doesn’t flow and has a bunch of misspelled words. Very easy to feel involved in action

Lucky, Lucky Brother , with a Great sister! You kept it exciting from beginning to end. Great job!

This story was by far one of the best ones i have read so far it starts with the action right away just what i like, keep up the good work samslam

You know you love reading way too much when you prefer reading porn to watching it.

very good story!

The Sleepover was a very intoxicating read from start to well written ending. You have a good talent for writing erotic stories. Please give us MORE!!!!

I gave it 4 Stars because of the errors in it.

This is one of the best written stories i’ve ever encountered; your plot and quality of its execution are more then enough to oit weight any grammatical or spelling despuits. I look forward to a chapter 2.

This an excellent story: 5 stars. It could be even better with a good editor helping with grammar etc. I suggest a woman to add her perspective!

A five star erotic story. What more is there to say.

my seal of approval, but still I want to compliment one specific aspect of it. In many stories in which one man has several female lovers the women tend to blend into each other, become indistinguishable, so you lose track of who's screwing who. This story ably identifies and keeps the women distinct. Not easy to do. Kudos to the author.

Thanks for the wild ride! :D Loved it...

As an author, I understand the difficulty of writing the erotic story. It is a turn-on for the writers as much as it is for the reader. I know I get a tremendous hard-on when I write, especially if the story is based on experience. I’ve talked with women authors who agree that writing makes them wet as too. Well, it is difficult to fully concentrate wet or with a hard, throbbing cock and the errors creep in. Stopping to masturbate doesn’t help; I’ve tried it! So readers, give the authors a little break on the spelling and other errors you encounter.

Try the chat section here and see what happens to your typing skills as you get deeper and deeper into a chat-see experience.

Excellent story and incredible build up! Great job!!!

Without a doubt one of the best stories I have ever read

I don't think I need to read the other chapters. I'm truly satisfied with how this ended. Will look forward to reading your other stories.

Without any doubt one of the best stories I've ever read here. Thank you so much.

thanks for the orgasm!

and for including the intimacy, romance, and emotional parts in this story. it is such a turn on.

i really appreciate how the characters' actions reflect more current values around nurturing, respect, and consent.

i loved this story. what a great read. unbelievably sexy. Wow. i'm still turned on. please keep on writing!!!!

You are one skilled storyteller sir. You also have a new fan. thanks

A couple of typos...but then I need something to complain about :)

Hell of a ride or six, looking forward to parts 2 and 3

One of the Good Ones.. Really like the anticipation waiting for Lauren.. Nice.

This was fantastic!! I need to read about the threesome with Kristina. Please!!!

How you can write so graphically without stopping to getting off yourself.... Am not sure if you are male or female, but you do know your way around each body and it's sensations. I have read the entire collection then went back over the first Chapter again. If there be a 'Pulitzer Prize' for erotic literature, I believe you should be awarded. Thank you, for a lovely embrace . Over and over, again!

As was said, numerous times in the story, "Don't Stop!"

Indeed, a Pleasure to read.

This was the Longest erotic story I've read and also the longest I've had a hard-on for :D I think it took me more than 2 days to read this entirely because of my free time limits and also because of reading the same lines over and over by going back immediately. It was as I said, simply PERFECTION!

Can't wait to read the other chapters! :)

Liquified Love Canal, new band name, called it!!!

Really enjoyed this one, a great read, could almost picture myself being there.

Your desciptive undertones were sublime.

Thanks for a great story :)

I felt like I was there, great job!

Great job good description and a nice finish well done

I fucked myself the story I am so wet rn

Really good for ppl to get horny and masterbate; ) FUCK ME DADDY

t. kissless virgin

...try not to cum 4 times or more with this story. I wish my friends and I were this loose and uninhibited when we were young, unattached, and surrounded by willing partners. All young legal age girls should immediately put down SnapChat and arrange lingerie parties while their parents are out of pocket.

It was a nice one kept on the up n up lol

This story was so fantastic! It was absolutely the right length and when it finished, it was like a great movie that said it all in one showing. No need for a sequel, just perfect!

It is such a shame that so many of the tens of thousands of professional writers just can't tell a complete and enjoyable story as well as this author. I sure hope he doesn't lose interest with adult stories, or just disappears.

A hearty "Thank you" for such a gem!

Like the sleepover, like all the girls, like that brandon comes home unexpectedly, I would of liked this story even more if(possible) Lauren was excluded from having sex with Brandon. Sorry but kissing my sister is out. I was expecting him to take Kristina's anal virginity with his finger first, Now that's getting her virginity.

Well done, Very hot, three very lush young women. What a good teaching moment for Brandon and a teachable moment for our girls

Well, it IS in the incest category and not Erotic Couplings or Groups. As such, I don't think your complaint has much of a leg on which to stand, lol. Besides, I think the level of angst and thought about the incest between brother and sister is appropriate considering the sexually charged atmosphere the author creates.

Your truly descriptive style really makes your story cum alive as well as the characters! Brandon must be triplets to be able to cum that many times in 2 days! I can’t say that I’ve ever had an interest in my sister, but her friends, sure! They were all older and I never got a second look. Your story helps fill that void in my much younger days!! I know that incest is not that uncommon, but people don’t talk about it. All the girls were really hot and I want to close my eyes and fuck each one...maybe need a day or two between...even Lauren! She’s not my sister!! A threesome sounds like heaven...or maybe all 5 at once!!? I am drooling from my mouth and my “middle member”!!! Thanks!! I hope to read more of your stories. !

Personally, I didn’t like that he fucked all the girls. I thought he was just going to fuck his sister. So that ruined it a little for me. Especially when they go at it one day after he fucked all of her friends. But hey, that’s just me.

I did find myself getting irritated by the brother's arrogant descriptions of his sexual prowess. Made me think I'd have preferred it if the narration switched perspective to Lauren. However the sexual descriptions were very erotic. Nicely left to me, the reader, to imagine the threesome at the end.

Nobody is going to say anything because they're too busy jerking off but reading this with a clear head, it's easy to see that all the sex scenes are just repeated. The girls all respond the same way, there's no personality or passion. It looks like you just copy pasted and changed the names. Not well written in my opinion. Just onewriter to another.

I loved your story and stayed hard the entire time I was reading it. He was one lucky guy.

Loved the story. I can't wait for the other chapters.

That was probably the longest story I have ever read,without losing interest for a moment.INTENSE!!!

That was so hot reading it. wish i have an older brother.

wow hot story it has good ending to long but well worth the read

Dammit! I wanted the Threesome to finish on! A little girl on girl while the Brother introduces them to buttsexx?

couldnt stop reading till I finished . What a turn on . Where is my husband when I feel horny.

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I thought when I saw 8 pages I'd get bored but damn that was freaking hot. I loved every single second of it. Awesome story

Damn that was a great story! More please

I am really enjoying your stories. Thank you 🙂

Wow. I just realized there are two more parts!!!!!!!

However, some may need to prepare to be disappointed with the series. Another author that makes up for content by just throwing more people into the mix at ridiculous intervals. Would have been better to just end it here.

This story at least the description between brother and sister is eerily similar to my 5 year relationship I have with my Sis. I shared the story with her and asked if she wrote it. She laughed and said she would have to arrange a lingerie sleepover. Nice work.

No story but just sex. This story belongs under "Group" rather than under "incest" genre. I didn't feel anything between MC and little sis. They was just horny to get their rocks off. Their sibling relationship didn't play any role in the story. Sis was just another object of lust for MC.

I was looking to read about bro-sis incest so this story bored me all through out and ended up skimming through all sex and trying to see if there was potential for interesting development between the siblings but there wasn't. If you are looking for over the top sex fantasy then this is it...

Went into this not knowing quite what to expect (don’t visit Incest/Taboo often) and was pleasantly surprised. Noticed you included Alex so you covered your 2 favorite catagories. Looking forward to reading next two chapters.

BTW, I am a compulsive proofreader (just became a Volunteer Editor to feed my addiction) and must compliment you on the rarity of typos, punctuation and spelling mistakes, and grammatical errors in your work. Kudos!

And to restart exactly in samsams style. Gorgeous!

Have really enjoyed all your stories so far. This has been the best. The buildup was good the finish with sister was the icing on the cake. 5 stars Sam!